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A1.Arista by ~Class-37:iconClass-37:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > People

©2008 ~Class-37
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Submitted: February 22
File Size: 277 KB
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Resolution: 622×850
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Assignment 1 - Head and Shoulders
Student: ~Arista
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~The-G:iconThe-G: Feb 25, 2008, 2:11:48 PM
That pose on number 6 is really great. And the one up the top looks really balanced and nice.

The head on number 9 looks a bit out in proportion. I think if the bottom jaw was placed a bit further down, and the eyes moved down with it, it might help to balance it out a bit.
~ProjNemesis64:iconProjNemesis64: Feb 26, 2008, 8:32:36 PM
You chose a good variety of poses, and sketched them really well. I really had to look closely to find anything to critique.

I'd have to agree with ~The-G on number 9 looking a bit out of proportion. However, I also noticed that the neck on number 8 is a little too long. When you tilt your head back like that, the back of your head almost touches your back. I think the pose would look more natural if the neck were somewhat shorter. Overall, though I'd have to say great job! :clap:
~Arista:iconArista: Mar 17, 2008, 11:19:13 AM
ah yeah I see what you mean, I mean would make it look more correct to the picture I used. I mean she standing there with arms up over her head so yeah. Thank you helpful comment ^^
~Arista:iconArista: Mar 17, 2008, 11:21:26 AM
aww thanks, yeah I wanted to get like ton of poses to try them out ^-^ I always make my necks a little to big it seems Xx;

Yeah thanks for help on number 8. It doesn't fully show her laying her head back but your right about how the neck is meant to bent ^^

Thanks again
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