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A1.Don46 by ~Class-37

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > People

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Submitted: January 30
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Assignment 1 - Head and Shoulders
Student: ~Don46
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Alright, so this is our very first assignment completed! Great job on this ~Don46!

Ok members! This is your first chance to show us your mad critiquing skillz!! Don't forget, you get 2 points for every critique you give! Remember, be constructive. Tell the artist what they can do to improve in a positive way!

I won't be replying to any of the comments here, I'll leave that option up to ~Don46 if he wishes to do so!

-Liss

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~The-G

Feb 2, 2008, 1:01:51 PM

Hey. Well done. I like how you drew in some ear guides.

For the horizontal lines you used to disect the head, I know everyone has a different way (I've seen quite a few) but you could try using them as guides for the eyes and mouth. I've found it's a lot easier to add brows and a nose once the eyes and mouth are locked in, instead of trying to fit them in later.

~Don46

Feb 4, 2008, 2:47:20 PM

Hmmm...Yeah, I see what you mean. Yeah, I'll try that out next time, thanks!

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"...Why are you here? Shouldn't you be annoying somewhere?"
-Don46

~ProjNemesis64

Feb 6, 2008, 6:05:19 PM

Good job. Your guidelines for the heads are well done. Eye and mouth placement are also good.

For the shoulders I noticed you used a connect the dots method. You might find it easier to draw the entire torso lightly as a kind of cylinder shape (it's kinda hard to describe in words). That way you could get a more curved kind of look. That's the way I do it anyway, so it might work for you or might not.